Your film treatment evolved out of considerable, lengthy discussion and the resulting realistic treatment suggests that you made the wise choice. Your characters are convincing and all very different, but each in his own way could be constructed as a potential risk for very different reasons. The treatment is both intriguing yet quite predictable: put someone in the wrong place at the wrong time and they could become a suspect. You leave the audience at the perfect moment of cliffhanger in this 'whodunnit' which will clearly unfold the enigma in stages. Very good work with excellent camerawork and editing.
Your film treatment evolved out of considerable, lengthy discussion and the resulting realistic treatment suggests that you made the wise choice. Your characters are convincing and all very different, but each in his own way could be constructed as a potential risk for very different reasons. The treatment is both intriguing yet quite predictable: put someone in the wrong place at the wrong time and they could become a suspect. You leave the audience at the perfect moment of cliffhanger in this 'whodunnit' which will clearly unfold the enigma in stages. Very good work with excellent camerawork and editing.
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